Form 28

My short story “Form 28” is now up at the Ampersand Review. Enjoy!

10 responses to “Form 28”

  1. fransiweinstein Avatar
    fransiweinstein

    What fun. Great story!

    1. Marc Schuster Avatar
      Marc Schuster

      Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

  2. Great read, nice work! 😀

    1. Marc Schuster Avatar
      Marc Schuster

      Thanks! Glad you liked it!

  3. inkspeare Avatar
    inkspeare

    This is insane; love it! Believe it or not, someone told me this once (part of a training) – “If it is not documented it does not exist.” And you won’t believe that this actually happened to a friend who was trying to pay his mom’s utility bill in person (Mom was sick – another country). The person in charge told him to please take a number. He said that there was no one there. She insisted and he did, then took a seat. She proceeded to call numbers (?) until his turn. Not sure where the other numbers came from. He complained, and she responded – “I am just following the rules, sir.” This is why I said it was insane but a perfect satire of our society (satire or reality?). I enjoyed it much, could not stop reading.

    1. Marc Schuster Avatar
      Marc Schuster

      Wow… That’s a crazy story, but at the same time, curiously not surprising! I’m so glad you enjoyed “Form 28.”

  4. Loved it. I have a creepy feeling this is real.

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      Marc Schuster

      Thanks! And I wouldn’t be surprised to find out you were right… Truth is stranger than fiction!

  5. Congratulations and good work!

    1. Marc Schuster Avatar
      Marc Schuster

      Thanks!

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